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Akida + Aoi + flower-ness by ~torriecat:icontorriecat:

Categories Manga/Anime > Traditional Media > Paintings

©2005-2009 ~torriecat
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Artist's Comments

Akida in dress, Aoi in suit with spicky hair.

I did this o.o with.. water colors.. <_< and my friend graded it a ~ 90

e_e critisim given - Back round needs to be improved. Hair needs to look NOT like wigs. Aoi's face needs better angle, and doesn't rest on body well. Figures need improvement. Shadeing and lighting need improvement.
How do i fix it.. x_x I don't know... (help, anyone?)

(o o) I some what like it.. but Aoi didn't come out that well.. and Akida's legs, where are they? x_x and the backround.. it's tooo littled detailed.



If anyone could derect me on how to improve my mistakes.. ^^ I would be very abliged~!

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~shadowed-eclipse Aug 28, 2005, 8:20:48 PM
this is very beautiful! good job! :hug:

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~the-rath-of-dawn Aug 28, 2005, 8:21:36 PM
well I like it! and don't down your work...it's demeaning to someone who can't draw as good as yourself.

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~the-rath-of-dawn Aug 28, 2005, 8:22:03 PM
wasn't ment to be rude. ^^;

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~torriecat Aug 28, 2005, 8:53:20 PM
x_x; I'm sorry.. It's just that.. i.. uh... don't know o.o...
UGLY DUCK SYNDROM! UGLY DUCK SYNDROM! UGLY DUCK SYNDROM!! *runs away* (shallow hal?)

Critisism ^.^" can be veiwed as a type of encourage ment to get better. :x so for me, it's encourage ment.

I didn't mean to offend anybody. (I'm really quite sorry)

^^ Plus, everyone is good at art! Art is an inturpritation of the soul, and every one has a beautiful soul! (okay, kinda.. XD)

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~heidi-is-cool Aug 30, 2005, 10:50:04 AM
;_; it's so beautiful...but the left part of the background looks like you though 'man, I'm not even going to bother any more'

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~torriecat Aug 30, 2005, 9:07:08 PM
XD exactally.

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